Digital News - Editing Feedback

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After i had made a few changes to the Folkestone edit i sent it to everyone in the group so they can tell me if they wanted anything changed or added. This is my second export i had done with the sound effects added and music + all the colour correction. My group came up with some great feedback to make this sequence even better.

-Skip Dianes first question
-Sound is too low - raise the GAIN
-Add cover shots in Cafe Teria
-Shorten Marcin walking into the cafe
-Music is too loud?
-Voice Over needs to have more energy?
-Add Folkestone cover shots over Diane

All of this i took into mind and made sure i covered it all, i had adjusted the gain and made sure that the whole sequence is shorter as we only had 2:30 minutes for this entire sequence. There is still much more i want to do with this but i will get more Feedback as i feel like the entire group deserves a say on it.

What i also noticed is on some of the shots the camera lens has rain drops on it which is very unfortunate, now we cannot do anything about it as we didn't see it while we were recording. It is not a major issue but it does cause a little bit of annoyance while watching it myself! I have now improved a lot in the sequence and can't wait to show it to my group and Sam.

I have now uploaded a third export of the sequence and the feedback is even better, there is not much that i need to do anymore, me Amber and Joni will now merge this sequence with the studio part and the moonlight drive in cinema for our final project.


I am very proud of how much i have improved this sequence/project, getting feedback from the group is also very helpful because they can see things that i might have missed and its also a learning curve.

Overall we still need to make this a little bit shorter as it is still very long BUT a huge improvement from the ones before hand, i'm going to try and cut down Diane's interview and also the coffee shop interview.

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